My Loves Wedding Poem by Kranthi Pothineni

My Loves Wedding

Rating: 5.0


One said, its a secret
So don't say to anyone
Said, she is marrying
That she is, my love
The one, don't knew it

Heart stopped for second
And started to pain badly
My throat too had felt it
But my lips had smiled
And said, its good news

The one said me date
And told me to come
By then heart was broken
But my lips still smiled
Said, wish i can do so

The one started to say
About my loves only love
So my ears were on job
And lips carried the talk
But rest of me had died

The one told me all
About my loves love
Then my dead heart felt
My loves love is better
Far far better than me

So I wiped my eyes
Said bye to the one
And placed hand on heart
Said, its time to sing
For my only loves wedding

Wedding, which i can't go
My broken heart is weak
It can't break down more
But its each broken piece
Sings a happy marry life

Forever to my loves wedding

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a depiction of a one sided love...may be.. not expressed...written well poetically

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Janell Cressman 02 June 2009

don't give up hope of finding your one true love, because true love is out there some were just waiting for you to find it! ! ! amazingly written poem of longing and heart break, i'm sorry it had to be written from truth

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Catrina Heart 03 June 2009

A love not meant to be....but have the sacrifice to free.....and be happy! lovely poem...10+++

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Joseph Poewhit 03 June 2009

You can't put a square peg into a round hole - some things in love just don't fit.

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Eyan Desir 03 June 2009

Good flow Good write Keep pouring your love

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 04 June 2009

This things are part of one's lie but only thing i know about he life is life must go on...............

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rago rago 03 June 2009

What is life? Go take her heart and hand and that should have done...Loveliest Angel Living In The Heart Alive........ we have to initiate and marry.....Society will never never never appreciate love of life.......you have penned well and brought the nerves instil.........

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Louis Rams 03 June 2009

the broken heart always survives the pain, because with true love there is so much to gain. you gave your heart when it was blue to keep her happy, and with that i praise you. beautifully written

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Lee Crowell 03 June 2009

you bring the feeling of brokenheartedness like a dart through my chest your unusual way of stringing words together in an noncoverstational style is appealing, it makes me feel like I'm reading your mind thanks for sharing this Kranthi

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Ashraful Musaddeq 03 June 2009

It is a sad poem. 10+++ In this poem you have described how heart started to pain badly; how it was broken and why you placed hand on heart. Touching composition. I became gloomy…

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