My Loyal Dog Poem by Abderrahmane Dakir
My Loyal Dog
My Dog has won competition in race,
I have learned to run in any place.
He comes to stay by my side in my loneliness,
His look towards me strengths my consciousness.
He wags his tail when seeing me at the gate,
So I've learned to live in the present to forget.
At the beach, he loves catching the ball,
I've learned how easier enjoying the mental.
He doesn't hold grudges even I hit his feeling,
I whistled for him to get back without barking.
At night, I sleep while he stays all night awake,
His difficult task to bite the thief and the snake.
He likes to stick his head out the car window,
He watches the road by his eyes that glow.
A dog is such a loyal companion to man. It loves its master unconditionally. It is great fun to have a dog around while going for walks. A sweet write on a dog you keep! Enjoyed!
Dog is man's best friend. Unhappy to see it's owner go away and very happy to see the person come back. It's loyalty is second to know. And if you spell it's name backward, it's god! Lovely poem.
i wonder, maybe i should have married a dog instead of a woman. would our child be a doman or a humog? i do not own a dog, but i'm sure they bring many 'owners' great satisfaction. a few suggestions: His look towards me strengths my consciousness... strengthens my consciousness and I've learned how easier enjoying the mental............. i don't understand the use fo mental here. also, there are several different forms of the sentence i could suggest, but definitely not the form you have used. and He doesn't hold grudges even I hit his feeling, .........even if (or when) i HURT his feelings? but you have made your point very clear: 'your' dog is a great companion, and a good watch dog at night. bri :)
Dogs are incredibly loyal and a wonderful companion. Thank you for reminding us the calming magic of a dog.
He's Beautiful! What is his name? Very touching poem about the noble and wonderful attributes of dogs and how much we love these faithful creatures. Brought tears to my eyes, I recently lost my wonderful companion, Sandy. My sadness is very great. He was my best friend. Thank you for this beautiful work.
Thank you Sandra for reading. I'm so sorry about your Dog Sandy.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 2:57:06 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A sweet and simple poem nicely penned on a loyal pet. Beautiful.
Thank you Mr.Akhtar for this great comment.