My Mind's Curse Poem by Alex Ritchie
My Mind's Curse
You smiled at me one day.
I smiled back but maybe it didn't show
because I was nervous,
and now still I picture it.
Did she really mean it?
Was it a disguise?
What was the deeper meaning behind it?
Did she like me back?
I can't stop the questions.
Its a curse and I'm afraid the only cure
is a hot, leaded bullet which I refuse to load.
This is my first poem, I understand it may not be anything great but please do comment and rate. :) I'd be happy to get some feedback.
deeper meaning.. I like it. I invite you to read my poems and comment.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/18/2024 6:30:41 PM # 1.0.0.1119
very nice and simple. questions r very nice :) keep it going