My Mom Turned Into A Vampire Poem by favie erase

My Mom Turned Into A Vampire

Rating: 4.5


It all happened on Friday night
I was seating home watching tv
I heard a noise
it was sort of a screaming noise
My mom came to the living room
Then it happened
She turned into an horrible creature
Her eyes turned red
Her tooth was pointy
she couldn't stay in the light
she drunk blood
OMG wat could it be?
is it what i think it is?
No it couldn't be
OH NO
My mom turned into a vampire.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chaotic Life - Curly M. 14 January 2008

Suiucide King comment was right add a little more stuff and details to it and it'll be almost perfect

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Suicide King 13 January 2008

I know if you put a little more effort into this poem it could be really good lol

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