My Mother Poem by Sayeed Abubakar

My Mother

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My kind mother, my paradise,
When closed her eyes,
My earth got lost
Fast in darkness. Now frost
Grows on eyelids.
I am now a motherless kid
Like a tree without soil,
Like a fish without water.

Tuesday, September 27, 2011
Topic(s) of this poem: devotion,lyrics
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
For my mother Amena Khatun
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lynette Hazel 04 December 2011

very vivdly drawn and intense for its brevity. the emotions are similar to my loss of my own mother. Please read and comment on my poem thanks.

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Sayeed Abubakar 15 January 2016

Surely. Thanks. Losing the mother is really a great loss.

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Jessore / Bangladesh
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