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my mother

I like to say ….. I like Complain
I like you to hug me my mother
I need your hands to wipe my tears
I like you to wipe on my head
I am tired and the time is very hard
I am deprived of you my dearest people
Your love in my blood my mother
I don’t find whose relax me
The sleep is went from my eyes
All the night I wake up and they blame me
What is my guilt if they don’t know my mother value?
My mother is more than to describe with compassion
Her value is mentioned in book which read until this day

Submitted: Friday, January 16, 2009
Edited: Friday, January 16, 2009


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  • loidz gums (11/3/2011 10:54:00 PM)

    whew, beautiful poem...a message that reminds us how we love our mothers and their everlasting love for us....nice poem....

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  • Sandra Dodd (1/29/2010 3:57:00 PM)

    Your hired! To sit down and teach my children how to love their mother! Well they do but this is fabulous. You honor her greatly here. Your words are wonderfully crafted.

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  • Marieta Maglas (1/9/2010 9:55:00 AM)

    Your love in my blood my mother

    wonderful reflectiive poem, dedicated to a mother.

    10/10

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  • Sasidharan Vellat Menon (12/23/2009 6:30:00 AM)

    Nice thoughts about Mother,
    the Ultimate truth on earth,
    the visible God.

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  • Merna Ibrahim (10/29/2009 4:55:00 PM)

    A beautiful maternal poem! !
    If you want, you could read mine 'My mother'.

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  • Siddartha Montik (10/28/2009 2:29:00 PM)

    wonderful expression for a mother`s Love! ! for..mother is Mother that no one can replace her place! ! ! 10+++

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  • Mark Nwagwu (10/18/2009 6:39:00 AM)

    the book you read, your mother therein, all the world understood, joy fills the heart. A great tribute to your mother, Akram - all the tears is went from your eyes, 'cause you've got this mother written all over your book

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  • Ency Bearis (9/7/2009 1:58:00 AM)

    a wonderful tribute to a mother...lovely indeed.....10

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/7/2009 6:57:00 AM)

    like you to hug me my mother
    I need your hands to wipe my tears
    I like you to wipe on my head... wordly praise may be less for mother. she is universal embodiment of love... i still cry for her.....10

    read mine o, motehr, mom i miss you... Mom and i wept...child...read papa do u knwo and papa u too.. u will have complete feeling for family...comment

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  • ****tamara Hanaring.****** , A Thought Mate, (6/6/2009 2:03:00 AM)

    a mother poem for every day when we are together..when we are away..10+++

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