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Loreta Muskardin (11/21/2008 10:58:00 PM)
How I wish you find all the answers |
Princess Cum Angel (11/14/2008 3:37:00 AM)
read dis poem 3 times...
i really have no words as my tears say everything.
very fine write.
certainly 10... |
Palas Kumar Ray (11/8/2008 2:28:00 PM)
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The pain of loosing and knowing no reasons oozes out from your beautiful words to make the more & more touchy. I share your sorrow beside this poem.
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heartfelt10. |
Athena Atalanta (9/17/2008 1:17:00 PM)
Very inspiring and emotional. Pain= poetry! but after pain comes happiness... theres a poem in that too!
You're a great great poet, thanks
Athena :) |
Val Morehouse (9/4/2008 8:57:00 PM)
Excellent. You are looking about you. And you know that pain is theme...but can it lead to joy? Explore some more things about you...the world is a wide plain planted with poetic first lines. Find one: then show how you did it.
Val |
Premji premji (9/4/2008 6:00:00 AM)
in the balance sheet of life
only pain is our asset |
Nathaniel Booker (9/1/2008 7:33:00 AM)
Having grown up without my own mother and losing the one who filled that void. I can truly relate to this piece. My own heart you've touched immensely.
Be Well
N8 (Nate)
***10*** |
Ashraful Musaddeq (8/30/2008 3:49:00 AM)
This is a touchy sad poem. |
Vidyadhar . (8/29/2008 8:05:00 PM)
An effective emotional poem
truth of life depicted in in apt words |
Dr.subhendu Kar (8/20/2008 8:07:00 AM)
tears yet ruffles faster in the lone void
returning bird yet not baffled by the storm
the dark shadow when hides beneath the light post
the cry prongs up into the fire of graveyard.................................all these questions seemingly unanswered baffling the truth, painful voices wake tears from the core of the heart, superb write, yet poignant,10+, thanks for sharing |
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