Aufie Zophy

Silver Star - 3,205 Points (18 October 1964)

My Mother's Lesson In Empathy - Poem by Aufie Zophy

At the time, I was a five-year old boy
A visit to my aunty, always a joy
My cousin was playing with cars at the back
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Comments about My Mother's Lesson In Empathy by Aufie Zophy

  • Bronze Star - 2,125 Points Elena Sandu (10/12/2011 6:11:00 AM)

    Incredible also the child who did not hide the toy and told his mother right away, at 5 already, a child can feel a wrong done thing. He didn't fight he was not pushed. As sweet as mother the child was.
    Lovely poem, thank you for share,10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lenore Lee (9/8/2011 9:04:00 PM)

    WOW! This is an amazing poem and it oddly sounds like something that happened to me when I was younger. I love the story and its meaning. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Anshul Gupta (8/21/2011 10:44:00 PM)

    Empathy and true compassion are two traits of a human being. Its great that this mother gave these two qualities to her son very early in life...hats off to the mother for her considerate behavior as well.

    The poem depicted the story very beautifully. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Lail Reveal (8/5/2011 9:56:00 AM)

    beautiful rhythm and great meaning. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maria Shipka (6/22/2010 7:01:00 AM)

    Oh! It had been really deep sowed of grain of empathy! Your Mum deserved the gift of this little poem for her life lesson what you remembered on all your life :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Denise Bekker ~* The Sound *~ (6/7/2010 1:10:00 PM)

    A lesson well learnt! Such a good read. Actually put a smile on my face from a mothers perspective. Well done (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amrit Rathi (5/28/2010 10:43:00 AM)

    Very good poem shows how subtly Mother handled the problem and what a change in the child's perception. The poetic craft is excellent I give 10/10. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Gita Ashok (5/24/2010 11:58:00 AM)

    What a beautiful poem! I hope they include such poems in the curriculum for school students. It would be such a wonderful way to learn about moral values in early childhood. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (5/23/2010 1:40:00 PM)

    That car, with orange stripes on a body of black
    Since then, I ‘ve quit forever the stealing

    a small little toy changed you completely already in childhood that you became a true person the whole life and your dear mother who became the cause of change in you for eternity. nice my dear poet. thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 11 Points Sreekala Sukumaran (5/21/2010 9:04:00 AM)

    My mother, incredibly sweet, incredibly bright
    Swallowed her anger but asked in a voice, slightly tight
    Please consider for a minute or two
    How you would feel if someone did this to you.
    Deep in my mind, I considered this plight.

    Very touching and very true it is... So sweet of the mother to understand and handle it in a such a good manner..Nicely written with utter care and can feel a mother's love for her son.. God work..Thanks for sharing.. (Report) Reply










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