My Nest Is Waiting For Me Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

My Nest Is Waiting For Me

Rating: 5.0


Evening is supposed to arrive
I have finished my daily duty
Now I have to go back with food
My children are waiting there.

I am a little bird, I am flying
My little nest is palace for me
Children are prince, princesses
They are waiting for little hope.

I am flying to go back to nest
Evening is very near knocking
Door I have to open and close
Children will take food in care.

I am a happy bird everyday I see
New light fills my life I rise
I know after dusk, dawn will come
In next day I will again fly.

Saturday, November 21, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: bird,evening,life,life and death,nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bakuli Bhakali 21 November 2015

the circle of life entangled in hope, care and love..well penned! 10

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Edmund Strolis 21 November 2015

The next day I will again fly, such simple yet grand observations. Reading this poem brings peace and a relaxed feeling always needed in these busy times. Princes and princesses in the nest/palace....wonderful.10

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Kelly Kurt 21 November 2015

Even the birds know to take care of their young and anticipate a new day

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Ratnakar Mandlik 21 November 2015

Beautiful poem with a philosophical touch and endorsing the affinity of a bird with off springs as well as the nest. Enjoyed reading the poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Aniruddha Pathak 07 March 2019

know after dusk, dawn will come In next day I will again fly... Refreshingly beautiful.

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Valsa George 07 March 2019

Indeed you are a happy bird flying on the wings of imagination until you seek sleep and rest in your cosy nest at night. There you will be joined by a happy throng of your fledglings and loving mate! By day break, with renewed energy, again you begin your flight! A lovely poem! A 10

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Pamela Sinicrope 21 November 2015

I like this one! Great imagery. A wonderful bird who takes care of his nest. I like the flow of the lines too. Well done.

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Loke Kok Yee 21 November 2015

well described life of a bird family my friend thanks

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2015

Superb poem Sir, I wrote a Senryu on bird's life.......Your poem covered everything in detail.

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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