My Nightmare Poem by sapphire santiago

My Nightmare

Rating: 5.0


im down on my knees, hands crossed, praying to the man up above
hear me please, hear me please, im begging you on my knees
you cant take him, hes not yours, hes mine, hes only mine
i look at him on the hospital bed dying, thats it youve crossed the line
how could you, its like im praying to def ears, do you not hear my crys or see my tears
your not real, you never were
this earth is meant for evil, its meant for bad things
this place is a curse, we live to die
we have no chance in life so theres no point to try
as i scream to the sky and tears are running down my face
i hear the monitor go dead, hes gone out of this place
theres nothing i can do, theres nothing i can say
so i just sit there in shock not believeing what happend today
my mind is saying hes gone over and over again
the love of my life is gone i will never see him again
my heart hurts, my body hurts, my head hurts and my stomach hurts
the excruciating pain is to much for me, my vision is blurred i cant see
everything goes black........i wake up to just a nightmare i look to my left and hes laying there, i look up to the sky and ask for forgiveness as i cried,

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 24 April 2009

This is an amazingly strong and powerful write Sapphire...well written...10+++

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Silvermist Love 22 April 2009

Amazing i love itz very powerful and u hve a strong message

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Nakita Ball 13 April 2009

this is so amazing i love this poem it sends a very strong message

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