I was born naked
with bare hands clinched
holding nothing else but
this subtle breath of life
that emancipates innocence.
I crawled slowly
then tried to waddle
and uttered few words
to convey something
my feelings and thoughts.
I grew up
a self made man
wealth is superficial glory
it does not make me complete
till the time I met you my dearest
I confess that i found my only you.
I love you
and you love me
this is the moment in time
I feel complete and happiness
made my life with you remarkable
that no riches in this world can replace.
A beautiful declaration of life and love - and brought in from the beginning too when neither can be experienced at first, gives the reader a glimpse into time from a human standpoint......very well thought out Marvin.
'That i found my only you'. Great line and a poem filled with so much heart felt emotion is just staggering. Great job. Loved it. Gave it an easy tenner. God bless all poets and readers alike-MJG.
superb! ! Eloquent........captured a lot and the love came out from heart! 10+++
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Finest thoughts flowing smoothly...Marvin Ten++ Ms. Nivedita UK Cordially invite to read and comment on Enigmatic Navel Lingerie-IG or other poems. niv