My Payroll, Pulse And The Puncture Poem by nimal dunuhinga

My Payroll, Pulse And The Puncture

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Oh! it's a sad tune as usual
When I touch these colored notes
The burning sensation what a pity?
My poor lungs try to fill happy air,
But always a puncture along this tiresome journey from a cruel thorn?
I am not a stripling to bear this stretch
And this tattered piece would break if you pull fast.

* The annoyed alarm clock wakes me up to fight with the life.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Alison Cassidy 20 March 2009

Your share the angst of your age with remarkable verbal agility, Nimal. Another creative gem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Sandra Fowler 13 March 2009

Very few people enjoy the sound of an alarm clock. Ironic since it serves a useful purpose. Good write, Nimal. Warm regards, Sandra

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kalubovila East, Sri Lanka
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