My Perfect Beauty Poem by Gordon D Wilkinson

My Perfect Beauty

Rating: 5.0


Beauty, real beauty is beneath the skin
With the love that is shown and freely given
Given to a lover, also humanity
A heart offered without any charge
For all those whose heart is crippled with grief
Joy and happiness shown to all humankind
By the soul which embraces life
Even an odd tear that slips out with emotion
At others losses and despair
Character with unswerving morals
Which respects, even those with none
Most importantly compassion
To the broken and weary souls
This, is the beauty I sought
Not the outer, unblemished skin
Nor the golden locks that flow like rivers
Sylph like figures did not figure in the equation
Finding my beauty, I am never letting her go

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Catrina Heart 20 March 2009

Beauty, real beauty is beneath the skin With the love that is shown and freely given Given to a lover, also humanity A heart offered without any charge For all those whose heart is crippled with grief Joy and happiness shown to all humankind By the soul which embraces life ------------ Awesome verses that can touch the heart of everyone...such a fine creation of beauty in inner depiction...10+++

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Thad Wilk 20 March 2009

You have painted an eloquent picture of perfect beauty, a poetic vision wonderfully expressed. Great read my friend! ! Best regards! *10*! Thad

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Stephen Stirk 20 March 2009

A beautiful and descriptive piece, with your own inimitable brand of imagery. Each of your poems demands a read. Those who pass on by, do so at your own loss. Great poem Gord Steve

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