My Poem Is Loaded Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

My Poem Is Loaded

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I have written a poem today,
About beauty you all do say.
Who is the creator all do ask?
This is definitely a super task.

This task is done by him only,
I have realized it sitting lonely.
When I have to travel I know,
With devotion before him I bow.

His grace has sure fallen on me,
From inner spirit ever I do see.
I write always in praise of him,
by his grace only I do get vim.

My poem is loaded here in mind,
I have written this new in his kind.
Binding the pen in paper it links,
To drop rain ever the cloud thinks.

My poem is loaded and reviewed,
Many readers have soon viewed.
This gives me happiness every day,
By God's grace I gain this I do say.

© Kumarmani Mahakul,25 January 2015. All rights reserved.

Friday, October 28, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life,lifestyle,poem,spiritual
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 28 October 2016

picture of Chris G. Vaillancourt xbeautiful..beautiful powerful words. 25 Jan 2015 by Chris G. Vaillancourt | Reply picture of Dorothy A. Holmes xA most passionate verse! I am smiling here! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves to Sing 25 Jan 2015 by Dorothy A. Holmes | Reply picture of Sylvia Frances Chan xYour poem written straight from the heart and most divine! Full of selfconsciousness. I like your word play, especially the title, perfect choice. I have enjoyed a very lot 25 Jan 2015 by Sylvia Frances Chan | Reply picture of Fay Slimm xSuch sincerity and power in these words of thankfulness my friend. A delightful read. 25 Jan 2015 by Fay Slimm | Reply

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Caleb Wiggins 23 October 2020

Wonderful thoughts grow much with powerful wink to walk on paper. Poems scribble mind. A nice poem you have written sir.

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Michael Walker 15 October 2019

A loaded poem is a good metaphor. At least you do not hide your beliefs, which are constant trust in God. Lately I have started to feel that about God, who may inspire my words.

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Edward Kofi Louis 29 October 2016

With the muse of Poetry. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Kelly Kurt 28 October 2016

Inspiration is a vital part of poetry.

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Nosheen Irfan 28 October 2016

Superb. So beautifully expressed. Yes, i can see divine inspiration in your writings.10

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Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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