My Poems (Haiku) Poem by Herbert Nehrlich

My Poems (Haiku)

Rating: 3.3


I do consider
my poems as my children
I shall not share them.

Those of poor manners
just stay away you wankers
you are not welcome.

It's strictly envy
you know that you're inferior,
consumed by hatred.

To me you're nothing
a windbag full of flatus
and diarrhoea.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Herbert Nehrlich1 04 January 2006

Ignore who, Mary? Oh....you mean the 'sediments'? H

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Mary Nagy 04 January 2006

Best to just ignore them Herbert.....I know it is frustrating. You get 10 from me! :)

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Herbert Nehrlich1 04 January 2006

You are correct, Liz. That is ONE Haiku. If you write several then you have more than one Haiku. And all my Haikus are 5-7-5 H

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Liz Munro 04 January 2006

Isn't a haiku 5-7-5 and one stanza? I don't know Sally tried to explain them to me but I still don't quite get them. Love the sediments esp 'It's strictly envy you know that you're inferior' 8/10 'cos I don't quite get haiku Liz.

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