My Restoration Poem by Lorena Lalen Cruz

My Restoration



The peak of the mountain
I shall soon reach
To scream out all the rain
And remove the stabbing leech

There I can say it all
The reason of my sorrows
The thing that made me fall
And the agony that flows

To remove the choking hatred
To have a very deep sigh
To unveil the ones unsaid
And the truth between life's cry

To drain my vanity
To gain more dignity
To blame nobody
Only the act of destiny

I shall reach the mountain top
For me to raise my sword
For my innocence to stop
For myself to be restored

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Danzen D. 12 September 2009

The beauty of self-healing when the leeches and parasites are gone...wonderfully expressed in a personally customized and beautiful poem. Great piece, keep writing!

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Julia Pascual 28 August 2009

this is one poem i really liked... nice write... =)

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Nashy Lamen 27 August 2009

To unveil the ones unsaid And the truth between life's cry.. I like this part... Life's cry.. haha.. Your restoration... You will be restores.. BELIEVE! ... the emotions expressed are strong needs.. To escape and restore... Nice write... keep writing.. :)

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Ted M 25 August 2009

The new beginning, the cleansing of the mind. Admire your attitude. Forget the past, get up to a good start. You are what you want to be. Best wishes.......

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