My Rights.. Poem by Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi

My Rights..



My parents take me to the Malls one after another,
Where I have seen local people and foreigners,
Young boys and girls hug and kiss each other, while shopping,
My parents did not bother to notice what I am watching,
Every Sunday we visit the Malls to shop and roam,
Until our legs are tired and then only we come back home,
Exam is nearer and I am grounded with books and tuition,
Outing, entertainment and TV all out of reach,
My father, a professional, wants me to excel,
My professional mother prays for me to succeed,
Both of them try to educate me as much as possible,
Even they may think of programming the brain of their child,
I am not as excellent as them and I want to practice,
How I was brought up. But they scold and curse,
That I am rebellious, not cultured and loose.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 07 June 2012

a nave narration of facts that parents ignore. shan

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Swetha Vanakayalapati 07 June 2012

sensitive and sensible...to capture right senses! !

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Danny Draper 07 June 2012

This is a good expression of true emotions in free form. Besides writing your emotions sharing them with your parents is also a good way to communicate. Poetry should be shared.

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Wahab Abdul 07 June 2012

nice one..good thinking, good rhythm and good question

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