My Road And Their Road Poem by hemu gupta

My Road And Their Road

Rating: 4.5


I don't know where i am going
I don't know why i am on this road,
my road is lonely,
everything here is hidden in mist,
nothing i can see and understand
except my own feelings

what others feel i don't know,
I don't know about road they had taken
or given to grow.

my road is leading me to unknown future.
as everything is unclear and hidden in mist
they are becoming what they were not,
but i am loosing myself in the passage
my road is taking me nowhere,
their road is filled with success and future.

i am on this road from my birth
lonely blindfolded and with mental torture
this road gives me no wordly pleasures or treasures
but extreme satisfaction
I am ready to be called anything
instead of doing what i cannot do and don't want to do
,
my road is giving me pleasure of giving others life
as they are in trouble due to their vice,
they are satisfied as they are getting treasure and success
by doing anything..even cheating me and others.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ChoppyRides on Facebook 12 March 2018

I hope that your journey has improved Hemu Gupta

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Such a nice piece of stasficated words.. but it could have been more better if you'd have kept the rhyme. keep it up :)

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