My Rose Poem by Adriana Martin

My Rose

Rating: 3.5


My rose is something that will never die
It will be with me forever
Even in death.

Its red petals folding, curving, and holding
My memories.
Its smell so sweet like the I breath.
Its thorns defending the rose's beauty
Just as I protect myself.
Its green leaves growing
Like my shadow.
Its stem holds me up when I am down

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Slim Jim 02 January 2012

defenitly unique. i love how well you compared each aspect, however it gave me a slight feeling that it was a little out of focus. great poem though.: ]

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Bella Hernandez 23 December 2011

Beautiful imagery! ! ! ! completely a unique poem! ! ! ! i would like for you to read my poem... what do you see in a rose

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Poet Of The River 19 December 2011

excellent! although i think it should say: Its smell so sweet like my breath. instead of: Its smell so sweet like the I breath. good write tho ;) keep it up.

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