Shannon Chapel (12/9/2005 10:27:00 PM)
Another great poem, C.J. Reading your work makes me smile - the innocence conveyed through your words - makes me feel like a child again. Thank you for that.
Shannon |
Hugh Cobb (12/9/2005 6:08:00 PM)
CJ,
This is a perfectly lovely children's poem. I would have loved it when I was a child and the child in me still responds with joy to its rhythm, rhyme & the playfulness with which the idea/description is written. (10 from my inner child, smiling with remembrance!)
Hugh |
Uriah Hamilton (12/9/2005 12:32:00 PM)
These children poems have a comfort to them, perhaps we are all still children! |
Denis Joe (12/9/2005 11:08:00 AM)
My shadow has got four legs. Wonderful, as always CJ
Love
Denis Joe |
John Kay (12/9/2005 10:23:00 AM)
CJ...very good. I liked the idea of having the shadow 'hooked' on. As I read more and more of these wonderful poems for children, I realize that I'm attracted as much to the voice in the poems as to the content and words, which are always clever and surprising. |
Ashka Pandya (12/9/2005 10:00:00 AM)
this is really a very different way to express shadows...liked it...
regards,
ASHKA |
Sally Clarke (12/9/2005 9:49:00 AM)
I had a little shadow at work today.....this made me smile, CJ...oh the joys of working with little ones.
Love Sally X |
IT'S ME K.S.Z. (12/9/2005 9:44:00 AM)
I like this, it reminds me of my daughter! |
C.J. Heck
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