My Silent Concert Poem by Minnu Serah

My Silent Concert

Rating: 4.3


Me, a hornbill
in the terror of love,

A fragrance of sorrow
to my realizations,
A stench of love
to my imagination,

Stillness of water
to my heartbeats,
the murmur of night
to my eyes,

My dream
is yellow,
My flowers have the
fragrance of waiting,
The touch of love
as hard as a glass castle,

In the circle of love,
who is at the centre?

You are as dense as
a moon, when I see you
through the clouds,

The bridge of love
may collapse
as you come...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
R.k Das 27 February 2008

a lovely and delicate poem which describes such a tremendous state of mind, the imagery the color the diction all go into creating a wonderful poetic fabric, the title of the poem is supurb, lovely and intense title,

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Sarah Macbean 29 February 2008

i really like this poem, shows what you were thinking the way you wrote it.

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Maria Rose 01 March 2008

Lovely...Lovely poem

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 01 March 2008

what a beautiful piece!

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Don Mcwilliams 03 March 2008

Absolutely beautiful. The language is musical. Very well done. Regards, Don

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Minu Alex 11 May 2011

Minnu........its soooo guuuuuuuuuuud

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Sarwar Chowdhury 23 October 2008

Insightful......lovely..........painfully beautiful! .........10+

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Emaleth Eternity 21 June 2008

Extraordinary music beneath the words Great wording.

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Marvin Brato 10 March 2008

A music to the heart! High mark.

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 04 March 2008

quit cool.keep it up

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