.....! My Sins...... Poem by Eyan Desir

amusing write... as my line goes 'if you are a sin, i want to be a sinner forever' nice thoughts here, Eyan something to ponder...to reflect on 10++++ Lovelots, Maia

ok, this is nice ha, , i saw my 2 friends here so even if am not invited, i'll write my wrds, , just delet if u find uncomfortable in it ian....and what did maia says? ...'if u r a sin, i want to be a sinner forever''.............waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...my goshhhhhhhhhh, , , okey, ok, ok, , , , me too..i write same wrds ha but little modified..''.if u r a sinner, then i'll make u out of it....''owwwwwwwwwww...hehehhehehe, red lepz donget angryyyyyyyyy, , , i love u my redlepzzzzzzzzzzz.....waaaaaaaaaaaaaaa...and u ian, the rabbit...a sinner is not all the time bad...a sinner speaks truths but speaks also lies, , , out of 100 percent, sinner talks 2 o/o truths, , , waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa, , , , and this is ony my perpective, not majority ha...hehehehhe, , , , and dont even get angry why i write wrds like this, , , u always leave naughty wrds in ur commnts for me...and sooooooooo? ..this time am ''pasaway''naughty in english, , , so, , , , if symptom persist, , , delet this, , , waaaa, , , bleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee... and to catrina, hm, , , , sssshhhhhhhhhhh, smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee....naughtiness of ur friend is here in love doctors page...so boring todayyyyyyyyy...let's smileeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.........

Very much good! mite i ask what was your inspiration at the time! I'm a early poet who is very much interested in what goes through a real poets mind at the time! and again! ur poem is remarkable

Amazing! Interesting too. Good write and well penned Enjoyed reading it

He who doesn't sin is not an ordinary mortal. Rest all of us are sinners and that's what qualifies us to be known as humans.

i`d understand 'i love to hate my sins...' although it`d sound strange enough... but 'hate to love...' i`m afraid it doesnt make a sense for me, but in general its a nice poem

That was great especially the last line. Even though we might not want to things we are not suppose to whatever it may be sometimes we still enjoy it

So eloquently put. The rhythm moves brilliantly, and the words are effective indeed. 10!

Don't worry about it, you've just eaten too many apples.

ti's good... things that taste real good are usually dangerous and we usually are adviced to stop them... to stop those vices... but it really taste good... real good.. how could we stop? ? we like it.. how could we stop? ? we, then, love it.. how could we stop? ? yeah this one's good.... i think eleven is enough..