My Strength Poem by Ashley Palladino

My Strength

Rating: 5.0


My strength was all you
You gave me a safe place
You turned your eyes
On me that day
So when did they become
Hard and cold

Wrapped your arms around me
So sweet and warm
So when did they become
Hard and cold

The day you hurt me
The most

The day you hit me
Is the day the end started for me
The day i let you control
What i said & did
Was the day the end started for me

My safe haven was no longer
The day you left the bruise on my arm
To prove to the world you were a monster
You took my control, my self esteem to an all
Time low did you ever love me at all

You went from a warm touch
To a cold slap on my face
You changed and i stayed the same

Always trying to please
Never quite getting there

You hurt me so bad
Cant stand the sight
I cringe every time
He comes near

Look what you've done to me
Dear

Good bye forever
This is the end for me
Good bye sweet soft skin,
Good bye warm touch.
Goodbye warm sunshine,
That i used to love so much.
This is the end for me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 21 August 2011

Wow! I can relate to this heart touching poem of love and pain! So beautifully and honestly done that deserves a 10+++++++++ If time permits, you could clearly see by reading some of my poems why I can relate to your poignant piece! Keep inspiring the World with more of your talented writes! Thank you for sharing! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from New York City! ....

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