My Top Secret Poem by Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

My Top Secret

Rating: 3.4


I have a big big secret
To no one I will tell
If that secret is revealed
I'll feel like I am in hell
There is this thing in my house
That's crooked, pointed and long
When anybody pokes it
They laugh and say ding dong
I know I should'nt reveal it
But my eyes are as red as a rose
The secret I told you about
Is actually my own nose.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. Kolitha Lelwala 19 July 2008

Lovely poem. Why do you say it's crooked? I didn't notice... lol.

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Diane Violet 23 March 2007

Risha, another wonderful poem...well done! Love and Hugs, Diane

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Patricia Gale 23 March 2007

A cute lil' piece Rissa. Don't worry we all have something we do not like about ourself.

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Aldo Kraas 21 March 2007

Thispoem is very cute Don't you know that the bell of your house does ding dong?

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Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

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