My Torn Heart Poem by xx3 mikki

My Torn Heart



Day after day
Night after night
We love each other,
Yet we constantly fight.

Maybe it's my fault,
Maybe it's yours
But that's beside the point
Because nothing will cure my heart sores.

Is this how it's going to be?
I don't know if I can take it.
So much going on in my life
And I need your support
Not your contribution.

You say you love me
You say you need me
Everyday you reassure me
That you'll be with me forever
Trust me forever
Always be my shoulder to cry on

But today you proved yourself wrong
Because when I needed your shoulder to cry on
It was because you made me cry

Maybe we're past infatuation
But that doesn't mean you have to act this way
I'm so sick of this damned stress
And I'm sorry to say that it's all your fault.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mel Vincent Basconcillo 12 April 2009

its not always the guy's fault but the poem is amazing speaks so much about u and he was a fool 2 do that 2 u! u deserve better! u amazing beauty seen in this poem and in you thx - mel

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Ershad Mazumder 09 October 2008

Theme is good.But I felt it like a letter writing.Its not poetic.Poetry is not essay or narration. Poetry is always covered with shroud.Its not open or undressed.Thanks for sharing your feelings.

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