My Train Of Thoughts Poem by Thomas Duncky
My Train Of Thoughts
I close my eyes and it starts to rain
In that instant my mind flies as I get lost in my brain
My heart tries, over and over to refrain
from these deceiving lies, but am overpowered and get carried away in this train
Of imaginations and creations
I am walking now in that rain
Of the subconscious reflections
You too are there, full of smiles and energy
I can only stare, and know you are ready
And then I ask myself if I could dare, and call you my lady
Then I rethink; is it not only fair? That maybe
You could give me an heir? After long nights of play on ‘our' bed
In my daydream am smiling at the thought
Of you being our tot bearer
Looking back at the battles we've fought
The ones that left our souls almost barer
I wonder, who would have ever thought?
That you and me would make it there?
Great poem man, like my friend Unwritten soul said, you are on the right track my friend.
The steady roll of the train wheels; rumble throughout this poem. Keep working those images.
The steady roll of the train wheels; rumble throughout this poem. Keep working those images.
You captured some precious aspects of love and desire. Really nicely put!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/24/2024 4:48:00 AM # 1.0.0.1119
Well train need a reel and if your mind used to thought in good reel dont worry you are safe...may your train dream will stop at the best destination soon..nice write, keep it up_Unwritten Soul