(28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

What do you think this poem is about?

..My true love..

You are my everything
you are my lover and my friend
the one I confide to
when I am sad, happy, or I
just need someone to talk to
I love you and I can't wait
to be in your lap
you are my everything
where are you, Mom?
my one and only true love.

Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2007
Edited: Monday, April 04, 2011


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  • Salema Khatun (12/21/2011 6:03:00 AM)

    this is a good poem nice nice

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  • Renu Kakkar (9/12/2011 2:08:00 AM)

    very nice poem..i wrote one for mothers day please read it..am sure you all will like it

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  • Yosra Baidi (9/5/2011 5:41:00 PM)

    yeah of course motheres are allways the first the best and the only treu love in our life
    actually poets sees their mothers like godess that's why whatever they write they think that they did not say everything
    i have a poem about the same topic it is titeled 'thiking about the idea' i wish you enjoy it just plz have a look and share you openion if possible

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  • Mohammad Muzzammil (6/17/2011 1:37:00 AM)

    A nice poem regarding the love of mother, who is no doubt, the sweetest and the greatest gift from heaven. You've paid a tribute to the mother, whose love is far from selfishness.
    I've also composed a poem under the title MY MOTHER.

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  • Cindy Kreiner Sera (4/7/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    Dedicated to a Mother - one who loves her child no matter what - unconditional Love....well done, Cindy

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  • shaharban v (11/25/2008 6:39:00 AM)

    mother's love....the cure for all ills and wrongs....in ur words....that feelings...the care, the sorrows.... all lie in that title 'my true love.'........love, the divine vitality that everywhere produces and restores one's life......really u r a great son of a great mother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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  • Maliha Mirza (4/5/2008 3:42:00 AM)

    very nice............................................................................. i think that when you will be big you will be a poet

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  • Uzma Jamil (11/11/2007 1:53:00 PM)

    Superb! Piece of work, keep up the zoom.Truly Uzma.

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