Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 49 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

..My True Love.. - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

You are my everything
you are my lover and my friend
the one I confide to
when I am sad, happy, or I
just need someone to talk to
I love you and I can't wait
to be in your lap
you are my everything
where are you, Mom?
my one and only true love.

Comments about ..My True Love.. by Mahfooz Ali

  • Gold Star - 19,816 Points Ramesh Rai (7/25/2013 7:01:00 AM)

    beautiful write. There is no other name than mother. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Salema Khatun (12/21/2011 6:03:00 AM)

    this is a good poem nice nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 343 Points Renu Kakkar (9/12/2011 2:08:00 AM)

    very nice poem..i wrote one for mothers day please read sure you all will like it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yosra Baidi (9/5/2011 5:41:00 PM)

    yeah of course motheres are allways the first the best and the only treu love in our life
    actually poets sees their mothers like godess that's why whatever they write they think that they did not say everything
    i have a poem about the same topic it is titeled 'thiking about the idea' i wish you enjoy it just plz have a look and share you openion if possible (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 260 Points Mohammad Muzzammil (6/17/2011 1:37:00 AM)

    A nice poem regarding the love of mother, who is no doubt, the sweetest and the greatest gift from heaven. You've paid a tribute to the mother, whose love is far from selfishness.
    I've also composed a poem under the title MY MOTHER. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Cindy Kreiner Sera (4/7/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    Dedicated to a Mother - one who loves her child no matter what - unconditional Love....well done, Cindy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie shaharban v (11/25/2008 6:39:00 AM)

    mother's love....the cure for all ills and ur words....that feelings...the care, the sorrows.... all lie in that title 'my true love.', the divine vitality that everywhere produces and restores one's life......really u r a great son of a great mother! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Maliha Mirza (4/5/2008 3:42:00 AM)

    very nice............................................................................. i think that when you will be big you will be a poet (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Uzma Jamil (11/11/2007 1:53:00 PM)

    Superb! Piece of work, keep up the zoom.Truly Uzma. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 31, 2007

Poem Edited: Monday, April 4, 2011

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