My Unique Tango Of Love Poem by Marieta Maglas

My Unique Tango Of Love

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Your words kill my reality
and divide it into
forgotten fragments

of life - memories. I am in
your arms and I am
slowly taking your shape until we become

a whole.

I really lose myself inside you. 'Tis night
and it is nothing
but a dream. Love

melts everything in both of us. I want

my metamorphose
to be irreversible. And words,

only those words
that accompany the act of love,


transform
the reality
completely and totally
into a different one -
a world of two. The seconds

are lost. Become eternal
for the perpetuation

of the moment.

You have been for me
a forgotten deity on earth- the man. If love
still exists,
it means that
you are still... that man. No, you're not

a stone god

and yet you are,

and I love you,

and you're not yourself,

and yet you are.

You are aspiring me.
You are aspiring me
until I become only

love inside you. Between black and white
in the morning,
at dawn,
between night and day,

from black over white
to white over black,

I am
your breath

because you continuously breathe me,
while I
while I.....
What do you think I'm doing all day long?

I'm waiting for you to come again
to me

because of your promise....

Wednesday, July 13, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: black african american,day,love,night
COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Pregnant with.passion and loaded with a love that is both rich and refreshing in its spiritual splendor!

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Daniel Brick 18 July 2016

Ezra Pound told T. S. Eliot that a poem can have a genuine impact on a reader even if he does not fully understand it. Sic. I really like THIS poem! but I don't fully understand it. I made a copy to look at later when perhaps my understanding will be more supple. Right now I am gioing to re-read it. Just a minute. //The first half is filled with incidents/images of a satisfying sharing of true romance, which climax in an awesome expression of love as union: I AM YOUR BREATH, etc. (simply beautiful!) But it seems the woman is more attuned to commitment than the man. And the last phrase - YOUR PROMISE - suggests the fullness of love has not been achieved. But at least the woman is fully engaged and ready to make this a PERMANENT Love Story. Your poem touches my heart, it is the sweet song of longing for true romance which is a defining aspect of our humanity. Maynit prosper in real life as it prospers in this wonderful poem.

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Marieta Maglas

Marieta Maglas

Radauti, Judet Suceava, Romania
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