Wesley Mincin

Rookie (04/20/92)

My Utopia - Poem by Wesley Mincin

Utopia

A castle built on rock and stone,
withholds dark secrets of unknown,
absorbing black aura in which to hone.
As part of this Fantasy Realm

The lightning crackles, thunder roars,
a lovely sound that I adore,
as dragons fill the skies and soar.
As part of this Fantasy Realm

A frost develops on the palace,
a palace of which withholds a malice.
An evil that draws fear from all of us
As part of this Fantasy Realm

To the East, Volcanoes boom,
releasing heated violence of doom.
Exhausting a blackened, vile fume
As part of this Fantasy Realm

A red-lit sky that's fire-paved
A land of fire that I've braved
With mountains punctured with many caves
As part of this Fantasy Realm

A land where Golem creatures walk,
under a yellow sun that stalks,
yet, gives the power of which to talk.
As part of this Fantasy Realm

To the South, are cliffs of high,
overlooking an ocean of I.
Pegasus sail across the sky
As part of this Fantasy Realm

The ocean stretches endlessly out
It cleanses my soul of fear and doubt
It holds no secrets or need for scouts
As part of this Fantasy Realm

Pegasus gallops upon the land,
kicking up water and warm, soft sand.
It leaps up to fly because it can
As part of this Fantasy Realm

To the West, a forest thrives,
where shadows and secrets comfortably lie.
A place where loud sounds and disruption die
As part of this Fantasy Realm

Within the trees, the banshees scare
and challenge challengers that dare to dare,
while protecting a beauty that's oh so fare
As part of this Fantasy Realm

This beauty dances amongst the trees
Her elegance like a graceful breeze
A beauty that all men wish to seize
As part of this Fantasy Realm

At the center of this majesty,
survives an ancient dynasty,
which wields the era, Serenity.
As part of this Fantasy Realm

And in this kingdom, thrives a queen
Most beautiful that I've ever seen
A goddess indeed, she should have been
As part of this Fantasy Realm

This realm I pray awaits for I,
when the time comes for me to die.
Escaping my corpse in which it lies
I go to my Fantasy Realm


Comments about My Utopia by Wesley Mincin

  • Rookie Darla Holt (7/21/2009 12:55:00 PM)

    Wes, great wisdom and fantasy are reflected in your poetry. I can picture your utopia. Wonderful work! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Lazarus Knix (7/19/2009 4:53:00 PM)

    In terms of description, this is your greatest poem.
    Well done. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,209 Points Marieta Maglas (7/19/2009 4:34:00 PM)

    ''At the center of this majesty,
    survives an ancient dynasty,
    which wields the era, Serenity.
    As part of this Fantasy Realm''
    nice poem, well penned with deep thoughts...10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, July 19, 2009



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