Jahan zaib

Rookie - 94 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

My Whole World, You - Poem by Jahan zaib

So perfect as a pair, my heart and thine,
So strong as a bond, thy eyes and mine,
O goddess of beauty, thy palace my heart,
Come to me once more, forever this time,
Sit not next to me, lay head on my shoulder,
Fix fingers in my fingers and my arms around you,
Speak not, just breath, our souls will speak,
Need not we to tell, our hearts will feel,
Be with me once more, forever this time,
Not we are the part of the world and people,
My word your eyes, your world my arms,


Comments about My Whole World, You by Jahan zaib

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (6/2/2013 1:50:00 PM)

    this is a beautiful poem of love for someone special. MY word your eyes, your world my arms. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 16,965 Points * Sunprincess * (11/25/2012 10:33:00 PM)

    to me i feel this is real love for someone..fabulous write. :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Akanksha Bhatt (10/8/2012 8:26:00 AM)

    really! very beautiful poem! i liked it very much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 24 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (10/3/2012 8:45:00 AM)

    our souls will speak-----rising up to soul level-is ultimate reality/fine (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Saeed Jan (10/2/2012 5:18:00 AM)

    Superb... pregnant words, emotionally charged.. Every word seems to be coming from the heart. Original thought, not that U forced urself to write. Here, the emotions find its way out and ur pen is used only as a medium.. The lines have a mesmerizing effect, anyone who reads it keeps reading till the end... One can get a glimpse like those of the Metaphysical poets. What I like about u is that U always create something out of nothing and poetry comes to u naturally... In true sense, I regard u the poet of beauty. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,913 Points Dave Walker (10/2/2012 4:32:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem, like it. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,530 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (10/1/2012 1:47:00 AM)

    Exquisitely worded romantic poem. Yor spouse shall luv it. My votes accept. Tell me do they show. U can read me too. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,750 Points Hazel Durham (9/30/2012 6:57:00 AM)

    A beautiful love poem so intense and as deep as your love, wonderful write! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 120 Points Persian Khushi (9/30/2012 5:56:00 AM)

    so beautiful, so much love.. a romantic at heart...
    if one day my jahan writes like this...
    he would capture my soul my being...
    love it
    RM (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (9/30/2012 4:33:00 AM)

    aww.....with each word my mind keep saying it...how sentimental
    each word full of charm each emotion within it enchanting and whimsical....beautiful just absolutely beautiful
    thank you so much for this wonderful piece sir
    love,
    payal (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, September 30, 2012



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