My Wine Cup Poem by Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

My Wine Cup

Rating: 5.0


We dance like the boat
With the passions as waves
I saw the wonders of the world
With the glimpse of her corner
Her sarree furl while she is walking
My wine cups are rolling in my hands
Like the boats wavering on the sea
Just like the waves on
The banks
Thoughts of my love
Rises in my beating heart
My wine cups are rolling in
The grounds

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 03 April 2010

‘…Her sarree furl while she is walking/My wine cups are rolling in my hands…’ Imagery with tall High…wine cup…symbolizes sarree…intelligently used as metaphor 10+ Ms. Nivedita UK

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Obinna Eruchie 16 November 2009

What comparison you have penned to make up a good description. Nice!

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Obinna Eruchie 16 November 2009

What a comparison to bring out imagery. Nice!

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 16 November 2009

nice comparison, , , good poem

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Catrina Heart 16 November 2009

great imagery...........well done!

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Sivashanmugam Shanmugam

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Karur / Tamilnadu / India.
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