Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

Gold Star - 6,809 Points (18/2/71 / Jaipur, india)

My Wondrous Dream - Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

Surrounded by mountains
Clouds hiding their peaks
I feel so much at home
ThIs floral valley, heart. seeks

Tiny rivulets
crisscross the ground
Their trickling voices
So much joy unbound

Tweeting and chirping
Gathering leaves and sticks
These little birds
Have their nests to fix

Waft of cool breeze
Heightens my senses
So many fragrances
Performing
Mix and match dances

I too join in
Humming own soulful songs
For the longest time
I have been so forlorn

Hearing me sing
Mighty Mountains would begin
Reverberating Echoes of my voice
I hear music all around

Breathless with exhilaration
I fight my temptation
To stay here forever
And never be gone

But it's just a dream
A virtual world
With wondrous theme
It's time to wake up
Face the world 's
Real scene

Topic(s) of this poem: Dream


Comments about My Wondrous Dream by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

  • Siddartha Montik (1/18/2017 12:49:00 PM)

    must be ! !
    a feeling of exhiheleration, I guess! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Siddartha Montik (1/18/2017 12:44:00 PM)

    Lucky ! !
    ..as you were in such surrounds, and had the experience. and wrorote these limes to share. I feel blessed to get that imagery thru your simple lines well expressed. thank you poet.! ! 10+++++++! (Report) Reply

  • (11/16/2016 10:26:00 AM)

    ReverberatinnEchoes
    Hearing me sing
    Mighty Mountains would begin
    Reverberating Echoes of my voice
    I hear music all around

    Breathless with exhilaration
    I fight my temptation
    To stay here forever
    And never be gone

    Wonderful poem on facts and fantasies that make 'life'. Loved reading. Keep writing andf sharing. Thank you.
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  • Terry Craddock (11/6/2016 1:47:00 AM)


    'Surrounded by mountains
    Clouds hiding their peaks
    I feel so much at home
    ThIs floral valley, heart. seeks

    Tiny rivulets
    crisscross the ground
    Their trickling voices
    So much joy unbound'

    reminds me of youth years hiking in mountains, wonderful memories, sometimes we must remember dreams are a tie to life, beautiful memories among our most beautiful blessings
    (Report) Reply

  • Spock The Vegan (4/13/2016 8:40:00 AM)


    Great imagery about nature and such. I like birds and mountains. I have several poems about them and about dreams, as well. Also you might like my educational poems about nutrition and health. Keep up the good work. (Report) Reply

  • (4/7/2016 5:44:00 AM)


    Breathless with exhilaration
    I fight my temptation.. why do u fight temptations. yielding to it sometimes is pleasure too. thank you.
    (Report) Reply

  • Kishore Kumar Das (3/26/2016 10:58:00 AM)


    your dream can be a reality...nature...the vast storehouse of beauty....you can feel the magic.. (Report) Reply

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/25/2015 1:51:00 PM)


    Hearing me sing
    Mighty Mountains would begin
    Reverberating Echoes of my voice
    I hear music all around love these lines and at the end your realization that all my desires are just a dream. the Reality is different. a very nice poem. thank you dear poetess
    (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (5/26/2015 2:31:00 PM)


    Enjoyed this poem so much I had to come back and read it again. You might enjoy my poem MOUNTAINTOP POETRY. (Report) Reply

  • Kim Barney (3/16/2015 3:58:00 PM)


    This is very nice. I felt that I was right there on the mountain, and I love the mountains. Well done indeed. (Report) Reply

  • C.n.prem Kumar (3/10/2015 1:04:00 AM)


    Breathless with exhilaration
    I fight my temptation - Nice rhyme. Beautiful poem
    (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (9/15/2014 4:18:00 AM)


    Nice piece of work. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

    E.K.L:
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  • Anil Kumar Panda (8/6/2014 1:08:00 PM)


    beautiful drop.liked the flow and rhyme. (Report) Reply

  • Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi (8/2/2014 9:19:00 AM)


    Thank you all my fellow poets...I am so honoured that you all liked it (Report) Reply

  • Gajanan Mishra (7/31/2014 10:12:00 PM)


    facing real scene, live. good one. (Report) Reply

  • F. J. Thomas (7/31/2014 1:27:00 PM)


    I don't know Nalini; I might abandon reality for this beautiful dream of yours. Each stroke of your words has painted a paradisaic image in my mind. Simply beautiful Nalini. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 31, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, August 1, 2014


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