My Wondrous Dream Poem by Nalini Jyotsana Chaturvedi

My Wondrous Dream

Rating: 4.9


Surrounded by mountains
Clouds hiding their peaks
I feel so much at home
ThIs floral valley, heart. seeks

Tiny rivulets
crisscross the ground
Their trickling voices
So much joy unbound

Tweeting and chirping
Gathering leaves and sticks
These little birds
Have their nests to fix

Waft of cool breeze
Heightens my senses
So many fragrances
Performing
Mix and match dances

I too join in
Humming own soulful songs
For the longest time
I have been so forlorn

Hearing me sing
Mighty Mountains would begin
Reverberating Echoes of my voice
I hear music all around

Breathless with exhilaration
I fight my temptation
To stay here forever
And never be gone

But it's just a dream
A virtual world
With wondrous theme
It's time to wake up
Face the world 's
Real scene

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
F J Thomas 31 July 2014

I don't know Nalini; I might abandon reality for this beautiful dream of yours. Each stroke of your words has painted a paradisaic image in my mind. Simply beautiful Nalini.

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Gajanan Mishra 31 July 2014

facing real scene, live. good one.

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Thank you all my fellow poets...I am so honoured that you all liked it

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Terry Craddock 06 November 2016

'Surrounded by mountains Clouds hiding their peaks I feel so much at home ThIs floral valley, heart. seeks Tiny rivulets crisscross the ground Their trickling voices So much joy unbound' reminds me of youth years hiking in mountains, wonderful memories, sometimes we must remember dreams are a tie to life, beautiful memories among our most beautiful blessings

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Anil Kumar Panda 06 August 2014

beautiful drop.liked the flow and rhyme.

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Dev Anand 16 August 2017

So many fragrances Performing Mix and match dances.. as i read your poem many times, i was dancing along with your dream.. thank you dear poetess. dev

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Rajnish Manga 08 April 2017

Amazing poem about a dream destination enjoying nature weaving its exotic charm. Thanks a lot. ]]] Surrounded by mountains Tiny rivulets / crisscross the ground Humming own soulful songs / I have been so forlorn

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Siddartha Montik 18 January 2017

a feeling of exhiheleration, I guess! !

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Siddartha Montik 18 January 2017

..as you were in such surrounds, and had the experience. and wrorote these limes to share. I feel blessed to get that imagery thru your simple lines well expressed. thank you poet.! ! 10+++++++!

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Unnikrishnan E S 16 November 2016

Hearing me sing Mighty Mountains would begin Reverberating Echoes of my voice I hear music all around Breathless with exhilaration I fight my temptation To stay here forever And never be gone Wonderful poem on facts and fantasies that make 'life'. Loved reading. Keep writing andf sharing. Thank you.

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