My Wrist Poem by Arielle Friese

My Wrist



it hurts so much
why do i keep doing it
I dont know because it helps my pain.

every time i do i almost put my self
in a hospital
but i can't stop

My Wrist can be
a lot
i say its my therapist
its my drawing board

so thats why i dont stop
it makes me feel good

so why do people tell me to
stop they dont care about me
they only care about them

if they i knew i did
it because of them maybe
they would leave me alone

but No

so i hurt again and agin

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Robert Roberts 21 December 2011

everyone cares but no one really cares about you but you thats the dilemma

0 0 Reply
Chidori Storm 21 December 2011

I feel your pain. You shouldn't stop writitng. I can easily read your pain. I can understand it as well. This poem is very beautiful. Don't ever stop writing.

0 0 Reply
Hope Anderson 16 December 2011

nice poem i just couldn't stop reading it: +) keep it up and keep writing

0 0 Reply
Crimson Love 04 November 2011

Interesting write, I enjoyed it. Truly beautiful.

0 0 Reply
The Devils Girl 31 October 2011

This is a really good poem. It shows how hurt you are. Know that cutting is not the only way you can vent things. instead of grabbing the blade grab a pencil and paper and write about it. I hope you keep writing.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success