Myself Poem by ben burgess

wOw! ! ! thoughful poem! ! ! I liked it so much...10+ How you are happy with the life you lead, Lead yourself not into temptation, Temptation is a world of greed. ----> wise verses! ! !

Life is full of wayward lusts.

Well thought out Ben - the usage of same word ending and beginning is novel and reads well..... concept good - - could do with a little more meat maybe as body of the piece is a little in need..... a very good read however and 10 from Fay..

Very deep poem loved this one you did great on expressing your feelings. laurel

You write how you feel and that is good, another well written piece, thanks 10 Lynda xx

I like this one but it doesn't have the rythm that it needs to flow properly and is not consistant rhyming, Continue however writing down your feelings however you wish. It's who you are. God Bless, Linda

Great work Ben, I feel it. I really do, it's pretty close how I feel it. And if you didnt write this, I wouldve. :)

Noone knows oneself than oneself. Each self has its secrets to canceal and weaknesses to congeal. Well penned poem;

On occasion I agree with Fay Slimm. This is such an occasion. Flesh out the poem as there must be plenty to tell. A very good effort though. H