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MYSELF

Myself, when will you grow?
Be a useful being
For the whole days
For a great tomorrow

Myself, when will you come back?
Be the old me
Which was full of spirit
Now isn't the same one

Myself
When will you grow
Be more clever and smarter
Clever to think of tomorrow
Smart to be wise

Myself,
Will the bright tomorrow be with you
Filled by happiness all the time
Because of the past tries
Would it be?

Come on,
Try harder to come back
There's still tomorrow to look
To repair all faults
There's time
To be myself
Myself is to be the great future

Submitted: Friday, September 11, 2009


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  • Shamik Bose (12/5/2009 4:10:00 AM)

    Clara, it is a nice poem. myself - has a lot of meanings, can be a mind, can be a heart, can be a soul in diff. perspectives. your poem captures the glory of myself well.

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  • John Knight (11/16/2009 12:47:00 PM)

    Hi Clara Angel - We all need to know ourselves to have - Self Confidence - Self Resepct - Self Awareness - Self Assurance. V 1 We can all improve our Self Image. V 2 We need to be upwardly mobile! V 3 We will develop if we study and take advantage of 'learning opportunities'. V 4 We need to be OPTIMISTIC (Power of Positive Thinking) we cab shape our own destiny by optimising today for a better tomorrow! Love you in poetry - JOHN.

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  • Prince Obed de la Cruz (11/1/2009 7:50:00 AM)

    improvement, progress, and development waits for no one. You just need to follow and possess them.

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  • Mubeen Sadhika (9/18/2009 12:14:00 AM)

    The description is rotating one. Nicely composed.

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  • Chitra - (9/16/2009 12:26:00 AM)

    A self-transfromative write.. connecting with the inner-self..10+

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  • JOSEPH POEWHIT (9/11/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    One must be true to ones self.

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