Mysterious Place Poem by Lento Maez

Mysterious Place

Rating: 5.0


I followed the wind today
It took me to a mysterious place
A wonderland of beauty and peace
Flowers waved in the joyful breeze
Playful squirrels gathered nuts
A butterfly caressed my cheek
This made a small tear escape my eye
It fell and bathed a dancing firefly
The swaying willows mesmerized all
A cryptic sign near the waterfall
Proclaimed that here there was no fall
Eternal spring was meant to enthrall
Oh how I wish the wind would say
We welcome you you're free to stay

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 October 2013

This is your best poem no doubt, among the ones I've read. A masterpiece! 10/10. 'This made a small tear escape my eye It fell and bathed a dancing firefly' Only original poets can say like this, Professor! How deep is your imagination, I wonder! You've made my day, with this beautiful, soothing poem, to proceed on. Thanks. K A

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Sandra Regan 30 October 2013

Very nice imagery. Please check out my poems if you have time.

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