Lento Maez


Mysterious Place


I followed the wind today
It took me to a mysterious place
A wonderland of beauty and peace
Flowers waved in the joyful breeze
Playful squirrels gathered nuts
A butterfly caressed my cheek
This made a small tear escape my eye
It fell and bathed a dancing firefly
The swaying willows mesmerized all
A cryptic sign near the waterfall
Proclaimed that here there was no fall
Eternal spring was meant to enthrall
Oh how I wish the wind would say
We welcome you you're free to stay

Submitted: Wednesday, October 30, 2013
Edited: Thursday, October 31, 2013

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  • Khairul Ahsan (10/30/2013 9:37:00 PM)

    This is your best poem no doubt, among the ones I've read. A masterpiece! 10/10.
    'This made a small tear escape my eye
    It fell and bathed a dancing firefly'
    Only original poets can say like this, Professor! How deep is your imagination, I wonder!
    You've made my day, with this beautiful, soothing poem, to proceed on. Thanks.
    K A (Report) Reply

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