Mystic Poem by Smoky Hoss

Mystic

Rating: 5.0


In my mind afloat
Drifts a mysterious small boat,
Lulled along
In contemplative song,
Upon a magnificent sea -
The far reaching ends of it all
That give quiet call,
Are far beyond me.

It all moves like waves wended,
And dreams rended,
Flowing into a vague speculation
Toward the acquisition of the ineffable;
Yet, ever accompanied by a fear
Of being unable to find the unsubvertible.

- I row - I go - for I must
Somehow know, and find
The place, the time,
That distant - near land, with
No more groping, nor grasping,
For lasting love, or the guiding hand of man.

Life has a mystic pulse
That touches all the earth,
Mystery has a meaning
Filled with unfathomable worth.

A mystic castaway resides
On an island in my mind,
Awaiting - and bringing - an appointed purpose,
Beyond the bonds of brains and time.
Speaking words of truth
- perhaps foreign to me -
A lavish love language
Of the truly free.
The translation to be found
When the captives are unbound;
The compass, the map,
The forward motion
That keeps me from turning back.

These living esoteric laments
Reveal great Beauty to my heart
- often blended within sadness -
Found in the metaphoric ways of nature and art.
It all gets to me
In the mystery I feel, of
A flowing vision,
In a world nearly surreal.

The mystic
Devoid of worthless words, in
Dialogue divine,
Puts one eye on eternity
And one eye upon time.

I've oft here been lost,
yet for only a season;
Stranded for merely a spell
For there is truly hope at the end of reason -
Granting pure life through it all

The Mystic within
Ever remains,
Vast and strong
Guiding beyond
Life's dark waters
Never leaving me to drift,
Completely alone.

'... mystery is as real as the air we breathe... ' - Kathleen Norris.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Constance K Yost 10 July 2011

It takes a very fine poet to write this way! ! Keep on writing! Constance

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Juan Olivarez 07 July 2011

The shear beauty of the words of this poem earns it a ten. Now to delve into it deeper, I believe we all have that person and that boat in our minds. In my mind it is an old hermit high on a mountain, communing with God. To each his own but I believe this to be your masterpiece Smoky. God bless. Juan

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Mohammad Akmal Nazir 05 July 2011

It was really a great poem written well with nice texture and imagery. Quite descriptive yet interesting. You have done a great job. Well done. Keep on writing. I rated it 10. Please read and rate my poem 'Abortion' on page 4. Warmest regards Akmal

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