Mystic Monks Poem by Pradip Chattopadhyay

Mystic Monks

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On the mangrove bank of the tidal river
lie embedded the mollusks,
they appear mournfully motionless,
deceiving you to believe
they’re too passive to be alive,
are just displays of dead shells
in their muddy graveyard,
though the truth is
they are mystic monks
silently enduring their estuarine transience,
bidding in meditation the time
the return tides carry them to their marine abode.

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
As I saw them yesterday at a mangrove estuary near the Sunderbans.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Juan Olivarez 22 August 2013

Love the metaphor. Well done.

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Dinesan Madathil 20 August 2013

A poem rich in mysterious connotations of the kind. Excellent rendering sir..

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Valsa George 16 August 2013

Beautiful comparison of the mollusks to the mystic monks in meditation! ! Enjoyed! !

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Mohabeer Beeharry 16 August 2013

I am trying to follow the thought behind this poem.i just feel good I like it Mohabeer Beeharry

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Dave Walker 16 August 2013

To see them and write about them a magical moment. A great poem.

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