Mystry Of Life Poem by TARA.. Star

Mystry Of Life

Rating: 5.0


Life is short to span
Sorrow is more to gain
Smile is no where
Love is only to share

No one is so dear
To tell every thing clear
Life is not a burden for those
Who do things without care

Flowers die in the noon
Autumns come very soon
Our wishes will cry For the moon

Go to your aims
Achieve with your hands
It is not so far
Just below the fate

Always you should smile
Clear out your tears
But remember me
Because
I am your dear friend!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Saadat Tahir 19 April 2009

laila aakum ill be honest and fair...always its a very nice and cute piece.... the end is abrupt and looks like you had to get up for something and wound it up in a hurry i am a humble student of poetry and feel we should let the feelings flow into words and not try to force it...not alwayz possible...another stanza before the end would probably do the trick... overall nice effort dont be diheartened...these are just my views tc saadat

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