Mythologies Poem by Irene Mitchell

Mythologies

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Anywhere
is the center of the world.

In the beginning
all was under water until
we took up our positions
upon the place of emergence,
the seeded earth,
making different noises for the same reason,
nourished on cloud pollen
and flower dew.
Arctic birds winged ahead and came back.

The fulmar flew over ice floes
with a flattering song
just as the people with much to carry in their sleds,
bows strung and thrummed,
were about to set out on a hunting journey
for sea mammals and reindeer.

However, they had no luck in their hunting
because Universe was sleeping,
not looking after his children.

Universe and his wife Rain Woman
had been busy billing the Northern Lights
as the flashings of spirits in combat.
The sky was so heavy in the morning,
it stole light from heaven so birds could find their way.
Universe and his wife remained in bed.

This posed a delicate problem,
yet I understood more than I saw.

I called to my steersman,
who rose and pulled up the anchor
awash in the sea,
believing only in my own mind.

Saturday, November 28, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 30 September 2018

I called to my steersman, who rose and pulled up the anchor awash in the sea, believing only in my own mind. very nice poem full of thoughts and imaginations.. believing only in my mind.. tony

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 May 2017

nourished on cloud pollen and flower dew. Arctic birds winged ahead and came back. Universe and his wife Rain Woman had been busy billing the Northern Lights as the flashings of spirits in combat. pulled up the anchor......... very fine poem very much original in thought and expressions.. tony

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Howard Savage 22 January 2016

This is a profound poem with great metaphors.

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Kim Barney 07 December 2015

Wonderful imagination. Sounds almost like a legend from the Navajo Nation.

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irene Mitchell 10 December 2015

Very astute, Kim. I wrote this poem after reading Joseph Campbell's Mythologies of the Great Hunt, which included revelations about the initiation rites of the Plains Indians.

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 December 2015

Universe and his wife Rain Woman... when i read this line, i simply smiled. you have great imagination. Imagination is a great gift of God for poets. thank you for your wonderful poem. tony

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