Naked Poem by gul naz

Naked

Rating: 5.0


The chilling wind that blown north
On an autumn day
Reminded me:

Of a lovely leaf
That was fallen from
A maple tree
On a summer noon;

Of a solitary star
That burnt and faded;

Of an oyster
Who lost his shell and died
On the sea shore;

Of an old man
Worn and shaky
Held his last breath
And died;

It reminded me
How naked we are
In the hands of God

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

It reminded me How naked we are In the hands of God..... God has kept key ih his hand so we behave properly and finish the mission.......10 read mine i am disgrace and welcome home

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You found a unique way to give a refreshing revelation of the raw, rabid reality of our nakedness. Thanks for sharing my friend.

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Ency Bearis 15 July 2009

In the eyes of God we are....intriguing poetic craftmanship....

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Surya . 14 July 2009

sure everything is in his hands. including your dress. voted10 surya

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Sameer Ahmed 06 July 2009

We are nothing in front of the will of God. A very splendid imagery has been portrayed in this beautiful poem with so much observational methodology ingrained in the essence and thus conveys a very strong message of the oneness of God......10/10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 05 July 2009

How naked we are In the hands of God.......wonderful image....like a naked child in our hands.

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