Naked Poem by cold september

Naked

Rating: 3.9


You have touched me
with the warmth of your breath
removing the veils
shamelessly uncovering me
in the whirl of the words
unspoken
you found me

Naked …
I stand there
Vulnerable …
and I am scared

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subham Dutta 01 September 2008

It's innermeaning is very good.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 27 August 2008

In brief, a nice poem.

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Tai Chi Italy 17 July 2008

This is how we all start in this this Cold S! trust in love and you won't even feel the cold nor fear your nakedness, I love being nude myself! being rude and nude is even more my cup of tea....bathing in your poetic waters, Tai

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