Nano Raining Poem by Heather Burns

Nano Raining



Clouds are gathering

releasing moisture

rain splashing on my window

the streets of life are flooded.

Monday, September 1, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Daniel Brick 01 September 2014

The processes of nature are closely observed i the first three lines, but then there is a big leap to the final line: THE STREETS OF LIFE ARE FLOODED. I'm assuming you meant this big leap. It's breathtaking and opens up a wide range of meanings, from the most dire to the most hopeful. I'm assuming you meant the outcome to be uncertain, to emphasize the sheer force which we must endure.

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