Treasure Island

Casey Lou

(07-14-1991 / Redding, Ca)

Narissa part 1


My ocean
Swell, swirl
Push, pull
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  • Rangarajan Kazhiyur Mannar (7/6/2007 2:27:00 AM)

    Warm welcome to the world of poets. Your very first verse bagged a score of 9 out of 10. A nice work. Life is also an ocean. It depends on us as to how we manage to be peaceful and happy in the ocean. (Report) Reply

  • William Jackson (7/3/2007 11:39:00 PM)

    There is something refreshing about the ocean even when it is threateningly rough and tumble. Fine poem, a lesson for Narissa. (Report) Reply

  • Yao Tzu (7/3/2007 11:03:00 PM)

    nice, reminds me of surfing pipeline waves for the first time here in Hawaii. (Report) Reply

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