Scotty Dogg

Rookie - 72 Points (Don't rightly remember. They always called me Dogg / The Potato Fields, Indiana)

Navy Boot Camp


Our
black boots
hold ice cube
toes,
with us looking straight
ahead.
Lake Michigan pisses
snow on our dry,
red fingers.
Wind whips our
snotty noses.
Waiting in ranks for Frost
to bite.

Submitted: Thursday, November 17, 2011
Edited: Friday, September 07, 2012

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  • Rookie - 340 Points Captain Cur (5/20/2012 7:02:00 PM)

    Aye! Sounds like Pirate Boot camp, except you might end up inside Lake Michigan.
    You got a unique style, I will say that. (Report) Reply

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