Near Though Far Poem by aung si myanmar

Near Though Far

Rating: 5.0


Oh, my dear song-birds!
With melodic music of love,
Please vibrate her treasure-heart
Delicately and kindly
On behalf of me.

Oh, my dear breeze tender!
With flowers' balmy aroma,
Please caress her pink cheeks to shimmer
Softly and warmly
On behalf of me.

Oh, my dear a cup of tea!
With delicious taste after meal,
Please feel her rosy lips sweaty
Eagerly and charmingly
On behalf of me.

Oh, my dear water-drops clean!
With harmony touch enchanting,
Please embrace her cute skin
Assortedly and fascinatingly
On behalf of me.

Oh, my beloved!
Though we're far in distance,
Don't be afraid and depressed.
They'll make you vigilant.
When they try you to dab,
Just allow them as my agents.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vikrant Jog 08 October 2012

Vibrant and Hilarious Aung Its worth it... Agreed Sir Thomas... You should be proud

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Eindaray Kyaw 28 August 2012

After reading this poem, only one that I can say is I have taken my hat off! ! ! ! ! The idea, style, words, tunes, verses, and so so in your poem are really great..no..no..more than great! ! ! I really appreciate you! ! ! !

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James Harrison 28 August 2012

You clearly are in love with this girl a lot I feel that you hope that everything that happens in the day reminds her of you and you seem to be seperated by distance but clearly it hasn't stopped you thinking of her any less, the words again in this poem are simply and greatly used in giving us a image of the events that each part of the poem descripes wonderful work. And I hope for the best for you two.

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