Necklace - Ultimate Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Necklace - Ultimate Love

Rating: 5.0


Your messages like pearls
Adorn the lace
I wear about my throat,
All your love and care
Is with me still
While you are so remote.

They remind my longing heart
Till you make your return
Until that moment
The flame of love
Steadily
Will burn.

Your messages are pearl,
your gift is lace
I wore around my neck
all your cares
your love is my ultimate necklace

Friday, October 30, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 28 November 2015

This necklace made up of love and care is really beautiful and will remain as such. It will reflect the flame of longing between two love birds. I love this poem. All your love and care Is with me still While you are so remote.

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T Rajan Evol 31 October 2015

Great necklace to wear.......10

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Loke Kok Yee 31 October 2015

Your poetry will become reality.-10

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Sanjukta Nag 30 October 2015

Brilliant use of metaphor. An extraordinary poem of love.100

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