Need Your Spell Poem by Reshma Ramesh

Need Your Spell

Rating: 5.0


Down into the dark alley way,
Oh baby! I know not where to you walk,
I am so mesmerized by your looks
Oh baby! lead me lead me,
I am so lost in the sounds of your footsteps,
Enchanted by the hair that swishes,
Maybe you are taking me down,
Maybe I can never get back
From this dark dark dungeon
Heaven or hell
Oh baby! as you lead,
My soles they bleed,
Me, I am high, I am low,
Oh! darling please please
Never let me go,
Captivated by your eyes,
Baby baby you haunt me,
Lead me, lead me, I will follow
From heaven to hell,
I am at your mercy,
Baby baby take my heart,
And if you leave me down here,
Never to come back darling,
Please remember this soul
Needs your spell to
Come back to life again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarvesh Kulkarni 20 November 2008

Oh...this poem haunts......greatly expressed....with amazing intensity...thanks.

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 20 November 2008

WoooooooooosH! I think my P.C. wires might be smoking! lol! Hope to see this one in your soon-to-come-collection, young lady! FjR

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Alison Cassidy 22 November 2008

This poem would definitely make great lyrics for a love song. Haunting and passionate, I can hear a guitar wailing through your lines. An interesting variation on your other poetry too. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Antonio Liao 03 December 2008

oh.... what a perfect mystery poem.... a suspense.... that allude me to see whats in my heart... so special indeed.... i love to read... some of the elements in your poem... Thank you... God bless

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Sadiqullah Khan 02 December 2008

There is a lot hidden passion here and reshma you always know how then to express it, , i like the passionate style, , why not to be outlandish, , there is someone out there who can speak with fervour, , many 10s

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Original Unknown Girl 01 December 2008

Sounds like he bewitched you.... passionately told. HG: -) xx

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 30 November 2008

You've captured the feeling so well Reshma.. Andrew 10

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Tarun Sharma 30 November 2008

crystal clear heart for the noun in the poem, true and couragious rgds

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Reshma Ramesh

Reshma Ramesh

Bangalore, India
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