Negative Poem by Queeny Gona

Negative

Rating: 3.5


The negative
In
My mind

That
I would like
To speak about

The negative
Flashing
In your mind

At
The glance
Of the title

Need not
Be
The same

For
I am lost in awe
With souvenir

On looking
A negative
On the top of attic

Left
Unwashed in lab
Fot its stupid pose....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Easwaran 04 January 2020

Keep it in the attic itself. Beautiful way of poem telling 10/10

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M Asim Nehal 06 September 2018

Nice thought again, I wish you good luck in writing such small yet pungent poems.

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In place of negative feelings one is supposed to nurture the positive feelings as in the wisest words of great men.A good poem here I enjoys

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Rajnish Manga 09 September 2015

This small but beautiful poem has an element of suspense of its own which enthralls. The mystery is resolved when the negative is discovered: Left / Unwashed in lab / For its stupid pose....

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Harindhar Reddy 08 October 2013

A simple but lucid verse. Keep writing - with best wishes

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