Negatively Positive Me Poem by Kelvin Owusu

Negatively Positive Me

Rating: 3.5


It's a positive that I'm alone with death
by birth we befriended, best friends til life's end
Negatively positive
I'm a positive in a negative mind
an environment refund living like a rebound
never wanted yet not discarded
happiness unconditional, so is my loneliness
suicidal mind's eye in tune to suicide's lies,
wise to the blind side
a smile for my hurt, a tear for my joy
food to fuel the life, hugs to pain's comfort
negatively positive as
I'm a positive in my negative mind

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
this piece is based on my attitude
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anita Sehgal 06 October 2012

the beauty of loneliness... lovely.. read

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Pink Pixie 28 September 2012

Wow this is so powerful. I enjoyed it so much that I wasn't ready for it to end. I found myself wishing it would have kept going. I invite you to read my poem Escape. After writing it I found myself having more to say so I wrote a second or a continuation called Escape II. When you have the time take a look and let me know if you have any comments.

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Gwenevere Cornwell 24 September 2012

I am the same way, mon ami. Je t'aime.

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Stevie Taite 24 September 2012

An optimistic pessimist x

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